I love how you have used only 4 takes... Animation does give us such freedom compared to live action.
secondly.. the Camerawork is really good. Its works very well in giving the perspective of a person accompanying them and demands involvement..!!!

I started thinking... maybe by not attending an art collage/school... i have been saved from most of these criticisms... But on second thought... this gives me an idea or prepares me to face them... thank you...!!!

This is a Killer jazza... you should try to reboot this series..!!!

Meticulously done... i am still a novice, but gotta say, the fire and overall lighting is spot on...
Impressive !